Hey Write Wayers!
The refrain in my critiques lately have been monotonous:
Add more details about the scene.
Set the scene.
What are the characters doing as they say these things or think these things?
In my mind, I set the scene in the beginning and it’s set! I assume the reader has retained that info, but it seems I need to periodically remind them of where the characters are and add some more movement to their actions as they move about their lives on page.
I get the point now. And I’m glad and grateful that it’s only one thing I need to focus on and not 12!
Well, that and that two spaces after a period!
Back to revising!